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  Macgyver on 14/09/2012 - 19:40

  +1

  Nice site.

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  retiredfeline on 14/09/2012 - 20:13

  Run your text through a spell checker, there are some misspellings. PS: Interesting device.

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  neil on 14/09/2012 - 20:20

  Looks good overall.

  This image needs the text to be fixed. Anti-aliasing/smoothing or perhaps a shadow layer.

  We are so confident in our product. We have a 30 Day Money Back Guarentee!*

  Misspelled and should be 1 sentence.

  Australia Stock & Free Postage with Australia Post! Express Overnight Post Available..

  Same.

  There is a lot of odd capitalization, missing commas etc. in the text on the site.

  You should put an ABN on the bottom of every page.

  The FAQ doesn't actually have any questions.

  Interesting item. So these are micro USB to standard-B cables?

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    Moots on 14/09/2012 - 20:34

    Cheers Neil. Taken notes on all your advice. ABN is on its way;

    This cable is excellent. Exactly as you said to standard B connector for any usb device.

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  issh on 14/09/2012 - 20:28

  Site looks good, easy to use.

  However,(maybe I'm just picky or something), but you may want to make the

  WATCH VIDEO about this product

  stand out more in the gray background; you can do this by keeping the gray background, but outlining the works, whilst keeping the white font

  Something, like this
  http://cdn.ilovetypography.com/img/2010/02/Armtg_Illus_3b_96…

  but you can make the black outline lighter

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    Moots on 14/09/2012 - 20:33

    Great feedback :) I'm listening to everything everyone's saying and working on it.

    The spelling will be done soon as well cheers!

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  scotty on 14/09/2012 - 23:48

  +2

  Nice site. Almost make me want to pull out my PayPal detail.

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  ProspectiveDarkness on 15/09/2012 - 01:31

  Looks pretty good :-)
  * I would advise going over the descriptions (especially on the main page) with intense scrutiny. It's not that they're grammatically wrong (in most cases), but a lot of sentences just don't sound right. It's probably better to present yourself professionally, rather than trying inject overzealous advertising into every sentence fragment.
  * Another thing: you may want to phrase the Frequently Asked Questions section a bit better (ie: under the headings of actual questions) I find it easier, myself, to read that stuff when looking at clear, concise questions relevant to me, instead of a heap of text.
  * And maybe make those pictures at the bottom of the order page a bit smaller. Being the most standout images at the order section, such a large size is a bit irritating and redundant.
  * Perhaps move the 'buy now' button so that its level with the drop down box?
  * Not really an issue, but have you considered adding an image viewer (like lightbox, or something) so that viewing pictures is a bit more sophisticated? Not essential, but it would be a nice touch.
  * Also, your "[email protected]" link doesn't work (is it supposed to be "mailto:[email protected]", instead of "mail:"?) Changing the link to "mailto:" in my browser prompted an email application, just so you know.
  /my 2 cents (hope I didn't sound too harsh)
  Other than that, it's looking good. Can't wait to order from you, provided you have the right price ;-)

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  Natt on 15/09/2012 - 02:23

  Puts on web content writing hat

  If I had to say anything "bad" it would be that your content is too "talky".

  Put that tone in about me page if you like, but try and stick to as little unneeded detail as you can everywhere else.

  What people will want to know is what it can do, how much it costs and how they can get it

  for example:

  USB On-The-Go Australia

  The next generation of Technology - that's OK you want to make a catchphrase

  This small USB Cable opens the possibilities of technology to every aspect - "possibilities of technology to every aspect" is extremely vague and acually says nothing.

  Try putting "this small USB cable" at the front of the next paragraph and ditch the rest

  add the compatibility here as well

  So you get

  This small USB Cable allows compatible smartphones to:
  » Connect to your Storage Devices.
  » Print from your Local or Wireless Printer
  » Wireless Keyboard & Mouse(a bit confusing by the way)

  re "The list goes on! With the in-built software already installed into your Smartphone; You are able to access virtually any device that is compatible without the hassle of Device Drivers!

  this paragraph means nothing - the list does not go on.

  and on the compatibilty page

  "So you may already know what the USB On-The-Go Cable is, and what it does. But if you don't I'll describe it now"- paragraph not needed you do not need to tell people you are going to tell them, you just tell them :)

  "The intentions of Samsung was to counter Apple with a smartphone that added additional features that Apple just couldn't do." - a little talky - put a note that apple devices do not have this functunality at the bottom of the table (where it really matter)

  "This was On-The-Go. This open platform allows any USB 2.0 Device to be connected directly to your smartphone with the normal features that you'd get from your PC or Laptop. Of course this would have to also be supported by applications to view .PDF, .DOCX and other formats of information but the brilliant idea just WORKS! You can play and transfer Music, Movies and Documents. Directly from the USB On-The-Go Cable. The USB On-The-Go Cable connects to your Mobile Handset or Tablet via there USB Port (MicroUSB, Mini USB)"

  • cull to the main points, avoid informal comments like "it just works", don't duplicate information and create at least two-three paragraphs to assit the reader

  'This is an example of the USB On-The-Go Official Licensed Samsung Product. These retail for $59.90 - firstly you don't have an example on the page, secondly do you really want them to get annoyed because you have a picture of their product on your page?

  Put a picture up of your product - that's what people are buying after all. Oh and you don't need to say "this is an example" you put the picture up and caption

  I am too tired to keep trawling through and doubt I have expressed my suggestions properly but its a start. Too tired to make them pretty.

  The only other immediate things is why don't you make a video of your product rather than use a long video that actually only shows what the "officially" branded products do - at least from what i can tell

  and in your FAQ you have a section on "features" that really needs to be on the home page or somewhere else - a FAQ is a spot to answer questions not a place to introduce critical sales information

  its sleeptime for me now :O

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  Natt on 15/09/2012 - 02:37

  oh one other thought if USB on the go is a trademarked term it may get sticky for you should the owners of that trade mark get annoyed.

  i could be competely misunderstanding but it seems that might be an issue?

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  Kiz on 15/09/2012 - 13:32

  Comment on the product? I think it looks awesome. I can't wait for you to release these to OzBargain. Just hope I don't miss it :)

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  andy19363 on 15/09/2012 - 14:07

  There's nothing worst than looking to purchase something over the Good Ol' Internet and not knowing what you're going to get. We under stand this so here is a demonstration of what you can do with the On-The-Go Cable. All rights reserved YouTube™

  http://www.usbonthego.com.au/video.html

  understand is one word….

  Same page

  30 Day Money Back Guarentee

  Guarantee

  Looks a great product……

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  andy19363 on 15/09/2012 - 14:14

  12 Month 24 Hour E-mail Support

  http://www.usbonthego.com.au/video.html

  I'm not sure this is necessary, as it doesn't really mean anything…. everyone knows that they can email 24 hrs a day, and I'm assuming you don't mean that there will be support available at 3am. I'd maybe remove it completely, or at least remove the '24 hour' bit.

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  andy19363 on 15/09/2012 - 14:20

  Again, on the video page….

  The video is actually 27 minutes long….. You might see if you could edit that to get the main features into just a couple of minutes…… It's no good having a great feature if people have to wait, (and stream) 27 minutes worth of video to see it…. most people will have long gone by then….

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  andy19363 on 15/09/2012 - 14:32

  http://www.usbonthego.com.au/faq.html

  Wow…. lots of spelling and grammar problems…

  and, as Neil and others have already noted, no actual questions

  I'd cut and paste the whole text into word or similar and run spell and grammar check, then think up the questions that suit the answers you have already provided…. or change from an FAQ page to a 'terms and conditions' page, as that is kind of how it reads at present

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  iseenya on 16/09/2012 - 13:44

  The text thoughout the website is so full of errors that site credibility is very low as it stands. Is the writer dyslexic? (eg. Nokia "Lumnia").

  Technical details are littered with errors and need serious fact checking.

  For example, the sentence "Although the Acer Nexus 7 (Google) is not Confirmed there is no doubt it will work with a required update of ICS (Ice Cream Sandwich) Operating System", makes no sense at all and is factually incorrect in several ways. The Nexus 7 is made by Asus, not Acer and runs Android Jelly Bean, which IS the updated version of Ice Cream Sandwich, but still does not natively support On The Go technology. The statement, "Supports USB 2.0 Devices Only" is rubbish - what about backwards compatible USB 3.0 devices?

  The website text needs LOTS of detailed editing and correction - at present it is a very amateurish effort.

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    Moots on 16/09/2012 - 13:54

    That's fine. The text is just for layout purposes. As of the site being slow I think you should check your connection the entire site is less than 1mb in size. The images are all compressed. Thanks for your feedback.

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  YadaYadaYada on 16/09/2012 - 21:30

  I think the site needs a bit more whitespace - currently it's a bit cluttered. That, combined with the 'chatty' text (needs to be more to the point) with spelling/grammar errors which others have mentioned, makes the site feel quite dodgy and a site I would not buy from.

  The pictures on the 'order now' page take a noticeable time to load (and this is on an ADSL2 connection).

  The FAQ page isn't really a FAQ page when there are no questions, and just answers! A better approach would be to list a series of questions and some short answers - no-one likes reading a giant essay!

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  Davo1111 on 17/09/2012 - 10:58

  +1

  I'm a visual person - It wasn't initially clear what the device is/was without clicking on the compatibility link..

  Maybe i'm a spaz, but i'd have the main image similar to an ikea instruction booklet. Some of the devices down the left hand side, the cord in the middle, and then on the right hand side, a range of devices that require usb.

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    Davo1111 on 19/09/2012 - 11:36

    Actually even a scroll system like a slot machine would be pretty cool

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  altomic on 18/09/2012 - 21:34

  Your Device Compatibility with the USB On-The-Go Cable

  FROM:
  The cable we offer is 100% Identicle. Made in the same factory departments and support exactly the same features without the hefty price tag.

  TO:
  The cable we offer is 100% identical, made in the same factory and provides the same features without the hefty price tag.

  there's other stuff like that which needs editing.
  looking forward to getting a cable.

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  ubor on 19/09/2012 - 10:47

  Nice…can't wait for the ozBargain price of $1.50

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  auna on 20/09/2012 - 01:45

  "This is an example of the USB On-The-Go Official Licensed Samsung Product. These retail for $59.90.

  The cable we offer is 100% Identicle."

  The Samsung GS3 is USB 3.0 capable. Your cable is not the same, and that's fine. But please don't claim that ESPECIALLY when you use the GS3 as your example 0_0

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    A3Australia on 20/09/2012 - 10:11

    +2

    "This is an example of the USB On-The-Go Official Licensed Samsung Product. These retail for $59.90.

    The cable we offer is 100% Identicle."

    Identical not identicle.

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      altomic on 20/09/2012 - 12:05

      unless talking about testicle

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  SmokeandMirrors on 27/09/2012 - 02:26

  I like the colours of the site. It is simple and unpretentious. In the Watch the features section, "There's nothing worst than looking to purchase something over the Good Ol' Internet" should be "There's nothing worse than looking to purchase something over the Good Ol' Internet". Good luck and hope you get ozbargained :)