Too celebrate our 5 year anniversary we are offering 20% off store wide, across all ranges and all products from home decor, pets, and best sellers, no minimum purchase required just use code ozbargainsept at checkout!
find the perfect gift for you or your loved ones for Christmas, discount is also included on any custom items
20% off anything, it says in the ad, no minimum purchase just 20% off store wide
it says in the ad,
Exactly my point. Ozbargain isn't a place for advertisements. It's a place for deals.
so 20% off isn't a deal to you?? if i went to the big retailers and they had 20% off thats a deal…
@LaserCutCrafts: I'm trying to help?? Giving an ambiguous title and description doesn't do you any favours.
20% off Store Wide - No Min, - $1.95 48 Hours Only
What is this $1.95? Is that shipping, do prices start from that or what? If that's not shipping, how much is shipping? Where do you ship from and how long will it take?
What are recommendations you would provide for people to buy at 20% off? What do you even sell? Your description is just marketing fluff like "the perfect gift".
@pennypincher98: thank you and duely noted, i have added in the title prices from $1.95, shipping is impossible to calculate as its done via location, turn around is 48 hours and we ship from perth,
i have updated to include some things we sell,
i welcome any feedback on my ad writing skills
i have updated to include some things we sell,
I've waited a few minutes to see if it just wasn't refreshing, but I still can't see this..
Give specific links to products and state their prices. If you wanted to go the extra mile, add a little description on each item.
Here's a tip: look at other associated deals that get good upvotes and copy, you'll find every single one is detailed. In store, if someone asked for a recommendation, would you say "we sell the perfect gift for Christmas"?
@pennypincher98: i understand and appreciate what your saying however we are not offering a single product we are saying 20% off store wide, if your after Christmas then simply click on Christmas, if your after a custom gift click on custom etc,
if you want a specific product then this is the link to our connect four games that are one of our best sellers, https://lasercutcrafts.com.au/products/personalized-connect-…
20% of that makes its $$39.95
@LaserCutCrafts: The information in your last two comments should be in the description up the top, so potential customers don't need to scroll through comments to find it.
"20% off Christmas" means personalised, handmade, custom designed Christmas decorations? I'm guessing here based on the information given. In the 7 C's for effective communication, concreteness is one.
Instead of
"20% off Christmas"
Consider
"20% off our range of handmade, personalised Christmas decorations such as baubles and stockings"
See how much more information that provides? Now I don't know how much of that is true, because you still haven't explicitly said what you actually sell… Just adapt it to your needs (and then add it to the description).
Your Connect 4 board is great but even when clicking there's not much information. Is it MDF, plywood, particle board etc? How about the counters? Do you provide spares if one was to go missing? (I'll admit building materials is not my field of expertise, and I'm not sure if even the original gives spares)
Other items have a lot more info so I know you can achieve this.
@pennypincher98: Your comment is valid to some extent and I’m not going to dismiss that, in terms of the material we use it’s very clearly outlined that we use a bc premium ply, if there is any confusion well we don’t use anything else
I can’t get much clearer then 20% off store wide, legit anything.. code will work on anything even the smallest purchases
@pennypincher98: So if if read correctly
we supply 22 tokens of each Color, this me# s 2 spares per Color..
If you want to pull me on my words please make sure you’re correct, I have 0 problem admitting if I’m wrong
I can’t get much clearer then 20% off store wide, legit anything..
We've gone full circle and you still don't get it…
it’s very clearly outlined that we use a bc premium ply,
It says that nowhere on your connect 4 game, and attempts at belittling your customer base is a sure way to put yourself out of business.
If you want to pull me on my words please make sure you’re correct,
Honestly on the defence again? I said you haven't told me clear enough for me to tailor it to you personally.
I see you've taken none of my advice on board so all you've still got is marketing bullshit, vague phrases and incomplete descriptions.
You're impossible to help.
Guess I shouldn't be surprised considering when your website was riddled with malware in 2019 you tried to tell people it was their PC that had issues.
agreed, find my designs elsewhere because you won't as they are all drawn by my team =), if you want generic stuff then by all means go else where, we do not compete on things like that, if you would like something thats unique or even custom then you have our link
Hey OP might be a great idea if add in the descriptions a few (3-5 products) great deals.. perhaps your popular stuff? Hope that helps
agreed thank you for the feedback i have added a few items as examples
No worries 👍
Any bargains?
20% off means nothing if you're 20% more expensive than a competitor.